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PostPosted: Thu Nov 15, 2012 8:48 pm    Post subject: Findail the Appointed Reply with quote



I thought I had posted an image of Findail before now.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 15, 2012 9:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

He needs some work. I'll type some concrits tomorrow, if you aren't yet tired of my quite blunt comments. Laughing
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 12:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The face features are very good, quite fitting for him I think. Very Happy

Perhaps the color scheme could use some fixes, particularly the eyes - closer to the book description, really visible as golden. His skin and his hair could also use some different colors, maybe something more vibrant. His clothing also looks not too fitting, perhaps something lighter, more like for an ethereal being.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 1:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Agreeing with Effy that the face in general has a good shape and the expression fits him. Yet it might look better with some skin texture and a more realistic lighting--the plastic effect appears here again. Also might be the fault of this particular monitor, but the illuminated half of his face seems overexposed.

Now, the eyes look a tad odd with those white long lashes(?). Also the garment: didn't he wear something closely resembling silk with a fine flowing cut, yet in tatters? He's also a fairly imposing figure in spite of his bedraggled state, a full-body picture might give him more justice. Smile Furthermore, I recall his hair hung rather limper, possibly tangled and across his face. Don't have TOT with me right now.

Here's one of my older sketches I'm not too happy with any more, but maybe could illuminate some of the points.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 2:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here's my interpretation of Findail. All Elohim wear turtlenecks, btw.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 2:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pfft everyone knows the men in particular wear floppy muumuus that look like as if they had been dipped into random paint buckets and left to dry on the path of wild animals. Also dislocated left legs are common.

According to the tradition, they also should be surrounded by naked Search members, possibly with rhino-ish qualities.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 2:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Pfft everyone knows the men in particular wear floppy muumuus that look like as if they had been dipped into random paint buckets and left to dry on the path of wild animals. Also dislocated left legs are common.

According to the tradition, they also should be surrounded by naked Search members, possibly with rhino-ish qualities.



This will be forever known as the worst cover for the Chronicles drawn by Darrell Sweet.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 3:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Frostheart wrote:
Pfft everyone knows the men in particular wear floppy muumuus that look like as if they had been dipped into random paint buckets and left to dry on the path of wild animals. Also dislocated left legs are common.

Yes, but if you zoom in, you can see the traditional Elohim turtleneck.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 8:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Maybe a toga? I think the face is a little too whitish like others said and please change his eye color. They look jaundiced.

Another image for the gallery:


(I think the female in the book cover image is Daphne)
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 9:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Did that guy(?) hunt down Edward Cullen and make a garment out of his skin?

A toga or a soft, figure-hugging robe fits my conception the best. But certainly not a turtle-necked muumuu. Wink
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 9:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Did that guy(?) hunt down Edward Cullen and make a garment out of his skin?

A toga or a soft, figure-hugging robe fits my conception the best. But certainly not a turtle-necked muumuu. Wink


You can tell he's blushing. Embarassed Being a shapeshifter is great but if you don't break an occasional turtle-necked muumuu you'll never find your perfect look Wink
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