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PostPosted: Sun Mar 03, 2013 11:58 pm    Post subject: Covenant (First Chronicles) Reply with quote


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 04, 2013 11:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Haha. Just a suggestion but I think a few wrinkles would add to the figure. He's 30-something and was having a rough life when the story begins.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 04, 2013 12:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice work, though! I feel there are some minor proportional issues....
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 04, 2013 4:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Works for me. Well done.

(Personally, I have never been able to capture what I see in my mind's eye when I read. Upon close inspection, my mind's eye leaves a lot out! Which is my way of saying I greatly respect such attempts, and think anyone who succeeds at it deserves good praise.)
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 04, 2013 11:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks everyone! No problem on critiques or whatever -- these are purposefully "sketch this out in no more than 10 minutes" and leave the warts alone. Wayfriend caught on to the purpose: I'm really just putting what exists in my mind's eye onto paper, whether it's perfect or not. I'm not a "fan art" kind of guy at all, but it's hard for me to write in words how I feel about the Chronicles; it's much easier to sketch something out, like a snapshot from a dream, and share that instead. So, requests / challenges welcome.
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