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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:44 pm Post subject: Too Much Chianti (1979) |
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...loads of fun Mum...I don't think I've posted it before, but...
longhair flying
soft snow falls all around me
stomach crying
from lack of food and too much Chianti
had me figured for a wino?
yeah!? well...
had YOU figured for a flake
the
the scientists are all to blame
for
for atom bombs and acid rain
love is a placebo
in this drugstore game
and all the children are insane
The Bill of Rights is not found in the Bible
call me a wino, will ya?
Hah!...I'll sue you for libel
I
I live in a house full of flakes
and
and can't handle this crap-ass molasses when I awake!
no, no
so all be warned of rain and the bombs
and certian sojourner of hyperspace
passing himself off as: a poet
named Tom _________________ "The day science begins to study non-physical phenomena, it will make more progress in one decade than in all previous centuries of it's existence."~Nikola Tesla
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Posted: Wed May 03, 2006 10:10 am Post subject: |
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Nice Danlo. More like a song than a poem I guess. and is that a line from the Doors in there?
--A _________________ Don't believe everything you think.
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Posted: Wed May 03, 2006 12:07 pm Post subject: |
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danlo: great! sounds like a song, really like the imagery. my favorite line...
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Yes this always felt like a song and yes the Doors line is in there on purpose (it's credited in the MS).  _________________ "The day science begins to study non-physical phenomena, it will make more progress in one decade than in all previous centuries of it's existence."~Nikola Tesla
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